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I love this style. Reminds me of the old comics. Great eyelashes! Much improved hair, too. The nostril on the right looks a bit off; I think you shaded that right part of the nostril a bit lightly. There are some blank spaces between her neck and hair, but I'm sure you're aware of that. Her nose is really good! As well as her lips...though they really shouldn't be that shiny on the bottom of her top lip. Generally speaking, that is. Her eyebrows are done very well; that you can see the individual strands on them is really neat. Some of the shading between her cheeks and nose seem a bit off, but I know what you're doing there, the way skin stretches awkwardly there. I'm not sure, but it seems as though the jaw is extending a bit far to the left. If it goes that far, I would think it would go a bit higher. Depending on the person, but it would explain some of the odd spacing between hair and neck. I really love the lighting on the eyes. Very striking. And the lighting on the area where the eyelids meet the nose. Very nice indeed. Oh, one more thing. The right eyebrow should come off her face a small bit as it turns; eyebrows are not like freckles. Since they're hair, they have to have some volume.